New Day, New Idea. Whole new opening

As my group and I came to class again today and began to get into more detail about our comic book opening we began to see some problems. We thought there was a huge risk of the opening turning out cheesy. As we thought about ways we could modify and improve it Alvaro remembered a song and pitched an idea around the song. The song he thought of was an eerie slowed downed version of Happy Together by the turtles that was in the Great Gatsby movie. He pitched that we throw away our other idea away completely and start anew with a more suspenseful thriller about a stalker and his obsession with a girl that doesn't even know who he is. We started thinking of all different scenarios we could do. We wanted to make our viewers uncomfortable but engrossed in our opening we wanted to have dark shots, close ups and extreme close ups to make everything much more intense. We wanted our first shot to be the stalker singing the song lowly ,and creepier like then the version we thought of, and be in a dark room full of photos of the girl and on one of the pictures you would see the the movie title and the opening would continue from there.